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  1. Bren Lee
    August 27, 2014

    Hi Sue!

    I think all bloggers could use tips on creating fabulous headlines. I mean, we get a few headlines in our head that appeal to us, but will it appeal to others? If you see it in your Twitter feed, are you likely to click the link to go read it?

    You share some fabulous ideas that I’m saving for future reference. First timer to your site and definitely adding to my feed. Thanks for the tips!
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    • Sue Anne
      August 27, 2014

      Hi, Bren,

      Thanks for coming over to the blog today! Social media and emotional type headlines work well. Here’s a great resource: http://www.aminstitute.com/headline/

      Happy blogging,

  2. Ravi Chahar
    August 27, 2014

    Hi Sue,

    Again a post worthy to read and follow.:)

    While writing a blog post the main thing to do is creating a blog post title which can attract your readers towards it. Having a title which can make people think about your post.

    It’s always recommended that bloggers should take care that title of their blog post must make it clear about what the post is about. I have seen many bloggers from whose title I never had the idea about their blog post. I mean how can they use the title totally different from their blog post?

    All the points are really remarkable.

    I hope you are having a successful week.:)

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    • Sue Anne
      August 27, 2014

      Hi, Ravi, Thanks for your thoughtful comments!

      I agree with you that the headline needs to attract readers, both in your blog post, your email and in social media. I also put in a keyword for SEO, but I’m testing that this month and will see if it helps.

      Happy blogging, Sue

  3. Josh Coffy
    August 27, 2014


    This was a fantastic article to read.
    Corbett Barr from Fizzle.co has actually been known
    to go down to bars and ask the locals drunks which
    headlines caught their attention.

    REAL-WORLD data is a must.

    Better yet, real-world EXPERIENCE.
    I write every blog post out of experience,
    not based on what I think.

    (I can’t stand reading blogs where people are
    teaching you something that they’ve never done!)

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    • Sue Anne
      August 27, 2014

      Hey, Josh. LOVE the story about Corbett!

      Data is key and a lot of us bloggers don’t like looking at data, but it’s a must (at least once a month!)


  4. Adrienne
    August 27, 2014

    Hey Sue,

    I use to be SO bad with headlines. I just wrote what I wanted and that was it. I even have a hard time now finding some of my old posts because I didn’t put the main subject in the headline. I was such a dummy but I really didn’t know any better. I’m not a writer!

    It was actually the first part of this year that I started paying more attention to it. I mean I have such a loyal community that they would read my content anyway but new people probably weren’t very impressed because my headlines were definitely not standing out.

    I remember what Jon Morrow said some time back. Don’t reinvent the wheel because there are never going to be “new” things cropping up. It’s just a new way to spin an old thing so take the headline and make it your own. Ever since then I have been doing my best to do better. Some I do pretty good on while others are probably still rather questionable.

    I appreciate you using Kevin’s title as an example. He did a great guest post for me and I agree, great headline too.

    They are really the most important part of the content because without them people might not be eager to read it.

    Great share and thank you again for the mention.

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    • Sue Anne
      August 27, 2014

      It’s a pleasure, Adrienne, to have you comment on the blog! Headlines are so tricky – you can try to avoid them, then you don’t get as many shares, tweets, opt-ins, etc. It can be very frustrating sometimes, right?

      Happy blogging,

  5. Brian Hawkins
    August 27, 2014

    I know we’re talking about post names but subject lines are very similar and I just split-tested the following two email subject lines this morning and, after 12 hours, I have the results. I was going to share the open rates but I thought it would be fun to ask which one is better if anyone is game. :) I hope that’s alright Sue.

    Subject line #1
    There’s a good chance you’re making this SEO mistake and don’t even know it

    Subject line #2
    Are you making this SEO mistake?

    Which would you use/open?
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    • Sue Anne
      August 28, 2014

      Ohhh, I love a good game :) I just read a study where questions do well but not as well as the tester thought. So, I’m guessing #1.

      What do YOU thing, Successful Blogging team??

      Thanks for playing, Brian!

  6. Ryan Biddulph
    August 27, 2014

    Hi Sue Anne,

    I’m such a big fan of using big, double figure numbers each time I publish a post.

    Maybe not always big, but almost always double figure numbers. 11 tips, 15 steps, 13 reasons, people seem to dig receiving large volumes of information.

    Over deliver of course, by sharing a powerful post to back up the title, but if you do, you’ll pull in readers quickly. The bigger a number – within reason – the better, although if you do 10 to 15 number themed titles a few times each week your readers will love you for it.

    My current post – see in ComLuv below – is kind of funny, a bunch of whacky experiences from my world travels and how they help you to become a better blogger. It’s controversial on some level because I noted “getting coked out” but I turned around and quickly threw in a disclaimer to set things straight.

    People dig stories, and if you’ll tell inspiring stories with an added flair for the dramatic you’ll reel in readers through your titles.

    Thanks Sue Anne, what a fab read.

    Tweeting through Triberr.

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    • Sue Anne
      August 28, 2014

      I LOVE disclaimers, Ryan! And your current blog post headline is a doosy!

      That is a great lesson about double-digit numbers and one I’m going to use more in my headlines.

      Thanks for commenting!

  7. Dennis
    August 28, 2014

    Hi Sue, I have to be honest, I’ve never been good with headlines like you are (especially when I blog about boring topics) which is why I always keep reading posts like yours.

    In a few words, you just caught my eye, and I ended up here :)

    Just to contribute to the topic, I use buffer to test out different social media headlines/messages. I apply what I learn there to my next posts OR when repurposing content OR resharing past content again. Works wonders :)
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    • Sue Anne
      August 28, 2014

      Hi, Dennis,

      Thanks for reading the blog post and stopping by to comment! I LOVE your idea of using a service like Buffer (only $10/month) to test out different messages/headlines in social media. Great idea that I’m going to use!

      Happy blogging (and title creation!)

      • Dennis
        August 28, 2014

        Awesome! Looking forward to reading more of your stuff :)

  8. Andrew
    August 28, 2014

    Hi Sue Anne,

    Really good post here. First off, let me start off by saying, I spend probably 2 – 6 hours trying to come up with headlines for my blog posts. I truly understand the importance of it because if you don’t have a headline that captures attention, then NO ONE will read your blog post, your sales letter, etc.

    Your tip about using BIG NUMBERS is huge. Too many times there are “7 Ways to do …” or “15 Tips For …”. While those are fine, they don’t have the same impact as “52 Ways To Do …” or “101 Tips For …” That’s just my opinion.

    Your tip about being controversial is a good one but at times you have to be careful with it. I remember a post by Neil Patel “Why Successful Entrepreneurs Are DouceBags” or something like that, and it sort of backfired on him and he ended up losing some subscribers from that. But on the flip side, he was able to get some new subscribers from that as well. So controversial blog posts are good, but you just have to be willing to deal with the fall out – if any.

    The tip I’m really focusing on, or that I’m trying to, is Negative Headlines. I’ve tried a few of those and they out-performed the positive ones. So I’m going to try using it a little bit more.

    All in all, superb post here. Will definitely be sharing this.

    Hope you have an awesome weekend.

    – Andrew
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    • Sue Anne
      August 28, 2014

      Hi, Andrew,

      Thanks for stopping by and commenting! You are doing the right thing – spend most of your writing/thinking time on creating the headline.

      I also saw that Neil Patel post – controversy is controversial, right? And I also do very well with negative headlines – especially on my email subject lines.

      Happy blogging,

  9. Catherine Holt
    August 28, 2014

    Hi Sue Anne

    Sometimes writing the headline can be more difficult than writing the post itself. If you don’t have a headline that grabs people’s attention, then the rest of your post is lost. It could be awesome content, but what is the point if it’s never going to be read!

    Love your tips here, especially the one about going negative. I recently wrote a post about why you shouldn’t start a blog. I had a large number of comments on it and some people mentioned they the title intrigued them. Bloggers were reading why they shouldn’t start a blog…funny really!

    It just goes to show that taking the time to get your headline right is really going to pay off.

    Sharing now through Triberr :-)
    Catherine Holt recently posted…Discover “What Is Your Why” In BloggingMy Profile

    • Sue Anne
      August 29, 2014

      Hi, Catherine,

      Thanks for coming and commenting on the blog today. Now you are an official member of Team Successful Blogging!

      I saw that post of yours about not starting a blog – the headline made me read it!


  10. Brittany Bullen
    August 29, 2014

    Sue Ann,

    I feel like this post and the headlines post I wrote earlier this week need to hang out together. You seemed to think of every last thing I missed in mine! You’re so right about each of these points and I love (and have already read) almost every post you used as an example here. It seems like we have a lot in common!

    I made sure to add your blog to my feedly list so I’ll be back for more of your awesomeness!

    Thanks for sharing this helpful info!

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    • Sue Anne
      August 29, 2014

      I totally agree, Brittany! I love your 1st point “Hook ‘em from the get go That’s what we bloggers are all trying to accomplish, right?

      Thanks for coming to the site and commenting today. Don’t be a stranger!

  11. Stacey Corrin
    August 31, 2014

    Hey Sue!

    I love, love, LOVE this post. Headlines always have me in a tizz but they can also be an excellent way of setting out the content for an article.

    I’m probably a little bit unconventional but I find it sooo much easier to get the copy of a post flowing, once I’ve got a killer headline. Perhaps it’s because it narrows down and focuses my original idea – either way it works.

    Sadly headlines can be THE most difficult little critters to nail down, while trying to be as original as possible. I’m going to be trying out some of your suggestions to see if they can help me out!

    Thanks so much for sharing,

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    • Sue Anne
      August 31, 2014

      Hi, Stacey,

      I totally agree that once you have the headline, the post itself is easier to write. I really like the headline of your last post – it has a question and it builds curiosity – just what are those 15 tools?

      Thanks for stopping by the blog today!

    • Sue Anne
      August 31, 2014

      Hi, Stacey,

      I totally agree with you – once you have the headline, it’s easier to write the post itself. I like your most recent headline – it has a question AND builds curiosity – just what are those 15 tools?

      Thanks for stopping by the blog today!

  12. Barbara Johnson
    September 1, 2014

    I just found you and your marvelous blog! Wow. I am so happy.

    Still floundering about like a fish that fell out of the tank. Reading blogs all the time. Studying courses, studying this and that. I love to write and have produced newsletters for years.

    I want a blog. I can do it I know. Just need a push. Seeing all these great writers who are doing it gives me hope.

    I’m going to do it this week. You will notice I don’t have a website address. Yep, that’s me. Never quite get it good enough to go.

    Now that I found your blog and all the help I know I’ll get it going. Why did your blog touch me so much more than others I’ve read? I don’t know.

    Thank you Sue Anne. Thank you.

    • Sue Anne
      September 1, 2014

      So nice to hear that, Barbara! You are a very good writer – you tap emotions and are clear and concise. You CAN do a blog!

      Here is a guide for you: How To Start A Blog

      Keep reading and coming back and sharing your thoughts. I appreciate you for that!

      Happy (new) blogging,
      Sue Anne recently posted…Blog Name Ideas: Why Is Creating Headlines So Darn Hard?My Profile

  13. Zachary (QuickMeUps.com)
    September 2, 2014

    Wow Sue, look at all those blogging heavy hitters commenting on your article. Awesome work and great article, will be sharing.

    So I have the following problem, I have kind of a non-traditional blog in the sense that my topics are many times a bit less tangible. They’re about complimenting yourself, or saying thanks, or helping others. Here are some example titles:

    Let’s Keep Learning, Have a Great Day!, Be a Leaf, 3 Lessons from the Lake, Get Grounded through Nature, Inspire Yourself, Stay the Course, Can you Help One?, Let’s Practice Peace, Rise & Shine, etc.

    So I’ve read a number of articles about headlines, but always feel like my topic is different enough that it makes it a little tricky. I could go the route of naming everything : “5 ways to feel better about yourself”, “10 ways to say thanks”, etc. I do sometimes use numbers, but if I did that all the time, it would feel very much like click bating, when that’s kind of the antithesis of my blog. Do you have any ideas or thoughts?

    Thanks again, keep up the great work!
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    • Sue Anne
      September 2, 2014

      Hi, Zac,

      I just dropped by your blog – nice site with a good sidebar opt-in box!

      Your latest title, How To Offer Advice Without Ruining Anyone’s Life. (Or Your Own.) is terrific. I love how you put the negative idea in there and it isn’t sweet and syrupy!

      Looks like you are on the right track to me. If you have any specific questions, drop me an email or leave another comment. Thanks for coming by today.
      Sue Anne recently posted…Blog Name Ideas: Why Is Creating Headlines So Darn Hard?My Profile

  14. Zachary (QuickMeUps.com)
    September 3, 2014

    Woops! Looks like you checked out somebody else’s blog with sweet opt-in sidebar and nice title.
    My title’s are usually short, motivational phrases between 3 – 7 words long.

    I don’t write generally write things like – how to turn your life around, how to make new friends, etc. It’s more like: Cheer up! Have a great day! Be you!

    Last 3 entries were titled:
    Give it Your All
    Let’s Keep Learning
    and Blessed to Bear Witness (poem)

    I actually created my site to be a very nice, relaxing place to go, free from pop ups, side bars, and 10 things screaming for your attention. I’d like to do some redesign as I move to self hosted this month, but I will try to keep it as simple as possible. Easy on the eyes.

    I have the comment luv link below or you can go to Quick Me Ups .com (without spaces obviously)

    Have a wonderful day!
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    • Sue Anne
      September 3, 2014

      Oh my gosh, Zac, I’m so sorry! Is “it’s been a crazy week!” a good enough excuse??

      I’m actually going to your real site now.

      Question: How is your click-through rate on each post compared to each other? Does one type of headline get a better CTR or better email open rate? That’s a good way to test them.

      I will not confuse you with anyone else from now on, I promise!

  15. Sue Bride
    September 7, 2014

    Yoast WordPress SEO lets you add titles and descriptions for Search Engines that are different to the actual blog post title and intro.

    I see the benefits if your post title is long and doesn’t fit within the Google character limits but I think changing a title completely is misleading. I have no problems with adding a meta description different to your first sentence(s) to instruct Google to use your words and not what it chooses as it often doesn’t do this too well.

    What do you think?
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  16. Atinder
    October 19, 2014

    Hey Sue,

    Well, Blog name and Post title, both depend on your creativity. I will surely use a Power Word with some relevant information for the Post Title, but when it comes to Blog Name or the domain, I will always go for a unique, creative and branded Name, whcih will help me in Long Run.
    BTW, Awesome Post :).
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    • Sue Anne
      October 20, 2014

      Hi, Atinder,

      Unique and creative for a blog name works if you have a tagline that clearly explains who your audience is and what you do for them.

      Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!

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